
Hand in hand we step
Into to the world of our dreams
Ready to traverse streams
What lies beyond the mist
May be cryptic
I love all that is mystic
Hazy skies are transient
Just like paths of life
Let’s travel beyond strife
I can see new avenues
Toward the morning star
But I want to go far
Far from this hypocritical world
That still sows seeds of dissent
Augmenting clouds of discontent.
© Balroop Singh, August 2019
Thanks to Sue Vincent for an inspiring Thursday #photoprompt Destination
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Beautiful poem Balroop which takes us on a mystic and dreamy path.
With stark reality at the end. I particularly like this stanza :
” Just like paths of life
Let’s travel beyond strife ”
miriam
Thank you Miriam. Isn’t life all about dreams and paths? 😊
Lovely poetic reminder, Balroop…
Thank you Bette 🤗
Beautiful poem, Balroop!
Thanks Miriam. 🙂
You’re welcome, Balroop. 🙂
Beautiful poem with some sad truth. 🙂
Thank for catching that truth Deb. 🙂
Always 🙂
That is a gorgeous photo. I love the path that can go anywhere. And your poetry makes it perfect.
Thank you so much Jacqui. Yes, the photo offers many thoughts and reminds me of ‘Road Not Taken.’
Gorgeous, Balroop… I love the sense of possibility…
Thank you Sue 🙂
🙂
Gorgeous poem, Balroop! Congratulations on your release date!
Thank you Lisa 🤗
A wistfully beautiful poem, Balroop.
Thank you Rob 😊
Somehow this seems different for you, in my eyes. I really like it! ❤
Now I read my comment, I realize it might be misconstrued. I like all your writing. It’s just this form, this pantameter, if you will, is a departure, from what I’ve read of your work. Very well done.
Thank you Bela, I can never misconstrue your thoughts as I look forward to the feedback of poets like you. Stay blessed dear friend. My new book has been released. Stay tuned for another post tomorrow. 🙂
Great! 💜
Well done! Very poetic of our present time. mary
Thanks 😊
Beautiful poems
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Excellent Balroop, I am with you on your path in wishing ourselves ‘far from this hypocritical world’
Sending love and well wishes,
Stay blessed my friend ❤
Thank you Sue 🤗♥️
You are most welcome Balroop