Flame
This red flame
carries dreams within
the fire,
the glimmer –
a volcano waits to burst –
a dormant desire
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burning balm
ignites a yearning
raging smoke
fails to sheath
the shifts that devalue love.
even souls smolder
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its beauty
dwindles with the smoke
illusions
darken with
the flame but it whispers love!
tethers fall apart
© Balroop Singh
Inspired from Colleen’s Specific form challenge. This week’s form has been chosen by Jules and it is Shadorma. I’ve written three of them on a specific subject.
A Shadorma consists of a six-line stanza (or sestet). Each stanza is written as 3-5-3-3-7-5 for a total of 26 syllables with no set rhyme scheme.
Image from: pixaby
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Here is my latest release Hues Of Hope
stunning – love the last verse
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Your welcome! 🌺
Beautiful poem, full of dark passion, Balroop. Wonderful. ❤
Thank you Diana, I am glad you liked it.🤗
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A journey felt deeply! Well done you.
Thank you Annette for coming over to read and share your thoughts.
As always, you amaze me with the way you weave a tapestry of words that evoke such poignant feelings and vivid images. Bravo, Balroop!
Thank you Mae, I am delighted to hear your thoughts about my poetry. 🥰
Sublime verses, Balroop! I love ❤️
Thank you so much Anita.😊
Pleasure always Balroop💖
So full of passion and firey images. Well done, Balroop.
Thank you Denise for your lovely words. 🤗
Sorry wrong expression, I meant 🙂 Fingers get ahead of my brain.
Poignant and evocative. So beautifully expressed, Balroop 💕🙂
Thank you Harmony, I am glad the images are working. 😊
Beautiful poems and so full of passion, Balroop. ❤️
Thank you Lauren, I don’t know how passion crept in. I was just concentrating on the flame. 😀
These are all lovely, Balroop! Fire makes for stunning and mysterious subject. Well done, once again!
Thanks Lisa, you are right… fire has many connotations and flame can be used in various ways. I am glad you liked these poems.
The heat of passion is described perfectly in your lovely poem- beautiful 😍
Thank you Jacquie. 🤗
Balroop, this shadorma trio is excellent. I love how you chose the heat of passion to thread its way through the stanzas. Lovely!
Thank you Colleen, I am delighted that the heat of passion is reaching through my words. Many thanks to you for the inspiration dear friend.🤗
Wow! Its a journey. Well done!
Pat
Thank you Pat! Welcome to Emotional Shadows.
I like how this genre allows ideas to grow and shrink.
Good observation Jacqui. That is the beauty of this genre! 😊
Lovely, Balroop. Beautifully crafted. ❤️
Thank you Gwen 🥰
Such vivid imagery. Nicely done, Balroop.
Thank you Staci.
These are all excellent, Balroop, and all different too.
Thank you Robbie. I am glad you liked them.
Each version you have captured the Flame perfectly Balroop ❤
Thank you for sharing your thoughts Sue, much appreciated. 😊
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Beautiful shadorma.
Thanks Jude.
Intense!
Thank you!
Hi,
It’s so deep and intense . Love your poetry always. You are a magician who shapes stories with words. This reminded me of the lines I wrote long back it was a simple one:
Light in dark,
cozy in cold
Symbol of being bold.
Smokes to kill,
smokes to flavors.
Ties you in bond,
Takes you beyond……..
Daljeet Kaur
Thanks Daljeet, good to see you here! Your poetry has immense depth. Keep writing dear friend. Love and hugs 🥰
Burning balm – your poetry!
Thanks 😀😂🥰