Paradoxical Pine
I walk into the forest in the month of October – a mosaic of colors, and wonder why it brightens my mood, adds a smile to my face and warms my heart. There is gold in the air but I have an aching desire to catch the drifting leaves – reminders of life passing by! The pine in my backyard doesn’t care.
Inspired by colors
mother nature’s lantern adds
a charm to its leaves
each morning it glows orange
to match the leaves of neighbors.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Colleen’s weekly TankaTuesday challenge, ( taste the rainbow) which has inspired me to create a tanka prose. Tanka is typically written in the 5-7-5-7-7: a five-line syllabic structure. Tanka prose always contains a title. One basic requirement: one paragraph, and one tanka.
Thank you.
Image from my patio.(pine pun intended)
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This is beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, much appreciated.
Great!
Thanks! 🤗
My pleasure 😇
Lovely poetry, Balroop.
Thank you Jan.
Hues of hope is a sublime collection of your ethereal poetry, Balroop. My Kindle copy is here before my bemused eyes. Congrats , my dear friend and poet. 💖
Thank you Anita. I hope you savor each poem. Looking forward to your views about this book.
My pleasure, Balroop! Savoring each poem nay each word will take an immeasurable number of days. In the meantime I have read a few reviews of your book and I have clicked on like. I am far from being a book reviewer yet it will give me great pleasure to jot down a few words of loving appreciation. Wanting and waiting for me. 😘
Its a lovely compliment… savoring each word! Only a poet can say so! Thank you and happy reading. 🤗
Thank you Balroop. I am also following on #Amazon.com. May be you may follow back as a starter.
Of course, I hold on to this treasure. 🤗
Beautiful lines
Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts, much appreciated.
So nice Balroop!
I love autumn for lights and colors and your poem expressed my feelings so well.
Have a nice day!
Thank you Marie. Have a wonderful day.
Draws one right into the season!
Thank you Annette, I am delighted to hear that.
Beautiful words and photo for this wonderful season, Balroop.
Thanks Lauren. I always share images of colorful trees in autumn, this time I chose the pine tree I love.
How lovely, Balroop. “mother nature’s lantern adds / a charm to its leaves”
What a beautiful line. I don’t mind the evergreens, but they certainly aren’t the stars of the season. 🙂
The stars of the season always get all the love in this season and my dearest pine gets neglected! 😀
Up here, when they’re heavy with snow, they’re very pretty. 🙂
Sure, they look so romantic in winter. 😊
I love autumn, too, Balroop. It is a time of gold in the air.
So true! The lantern of mother nature illuminates gold even in the greens. Thank you Denise.
I love the color orange reflected in the sunrise, sunset, and the autumn leaves. This is so lovely, Balroop! 🧡
Thank you Colleen, I love that orange heart and your feedback.
We’ll deserved, Balroop! 🧡
Lovely… 🧡💛💚
Thanks Bette 🤗
My pleasure, Balroop! Have a wonderful weekend, my friend. 💞
Lovely, Balroop. Orange is one of my favorite colors. 😊
Thank you Gwen. Orange is such a vibrant color!
Splendid and excellent poem. Nature is always at its best. Pleasure to read your poem Balroop ❤️
Thank you Kamal.
Welcome dear Balroop ❤️
HI Balroop, this is another lovely poem. I am glad you like autumn.
Thank you for stopping by to share your thoughts Robbie.
I love the expression “mother nature’s lantern” to describe bright autumn leaves.
Thank you!
You’re welcome!
Charming!
Thanks!