#Success #Troiku #Poetry

Published on by balroop2013

pursuing success
the sole goal of life
looking beyond relationships

pursuing success
stumbling on goalposts
never losing the focus

the sole goal of life
self-motivation ignites
the kiss of dawn

looking beyond relationships
a lonely path on clouds 
destination blurry
© Balroop Singh

Thanks to Colleen ‘s poetry challenge. This week, the challenge is to craft a Troika.

The Troiku is a form created by Chèvrefeuille at https://carpediemtroikuworld.blogspot.com/2015/10/welcome.html. (You can click on the link to understand this form.)

Inspired from haiku, this is a fun form, as it gives freedom from syllables. Yahoo!

Next week, I am traveling and would be away for almost three weeks. Despite the boosters, we have to keep the masks on for a lo….ng international flight!

See you in November!

Image from Pixaby.

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Here is my latest release  Hues Of Hope 

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37 thoughts on “#Success #Troiku #Poetry”

  1. That’s really well written, Balroop! 🙂

    I personally feel like life is about more than achieving success, but I get where you’re coming from.

    Much love,
    David

    1. Thank you David! I agree life is much more than success but we realize it quite late and some people never do! Most of us try to figure out with their own experiences. 😊

  4. I really enjoyed that, Balroop. I like the repetition of using the first line again in the subsequent stanza. I will click over to read more about this form. Have a wonderful trip and we shall see you in November. My goodness, the year is coming to its last ‘quarter’ 😮

    1. This was a fun challenge! I am new to this form but I liked it. Thank you Lisa for your lovely wishes. Yes! Time has been moving so fast! 😃

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