
Damsel of Buds
Welcome
to my garden
to revel in colors,
sprinkled by the dainty damsel
of buds.
she strides
with dreamy lull,
creates the land of love
doves coo – melodies that allure
beaus.
fragrance
blends with beauty,
flutters with the petals
misty dance of pink and purple-
a balm!
arms of
Mother Nature
drape around stressful nerves
serenity percolates now
through air.
wondrous
garden of bliss
that sparkles for moments
just pause to admire the unique
artist.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to craft syllabic poetry. This week, the inspiration is a painting, which was featured on Rebecca’s post:
#FridayPainting: Claude Monet “The Artist’s Garden at Giverny”
I’ve written a Crown cinquain, a sequence of five cinquain stanzas functioning to construct one larger poem. This poem has five stanzas, each with syllable count of 2/4/6/8/2.
Thank you.
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I was pulled into this by the painting. Your poem goes so well as a companion. Love this stanza… “arms of
Mother Nature
drape around stressful nerves
serenity percolates now
through air.” Great word choice- serenity percolates.
Welcome to Emotional Shadows, I am glad you liked my poetry. Thank you for stopping over to read and share your thoughts.
Well done, Balroop! I felt like I was walking through Monet’s garden. If only in my dreams and your poetry… xo
Thank you Lisa, what a heartwarming thought! Love and hugs.
Grateful that I paused to admire your poetry!
Thank you so much Annette, your pausing and admiration is much appreciated.
we were walking through the garden with you 💞
I enjoyed your company 😊 Thanks for coming over.
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Your poem is the perfect accompaniment to Monet’s painting. He really was a genius!
Thank you Jacquie.
Lovely lines, Balroop. “pause to admire the unique artist”–could we all, please?
Thank you Jacqui! Isn’t it wonderful that we can see such beauty just by sitting on our couches?
I could almost smell the fragrance and be with the blissful beauty of the blooms with your words – what a perfect beautiful poem as if the painitng and the poem are made for each other.
What a lovely thought! Thank you so much dear Prag. 🤗
Dear Balroop, your poem is so lovely and filled with joy at seeing this wonderful garden
of Monet. “ This wondrous garden of bliss” , quoting you.
I have been to Muse’e d’Orsay a number of times and always feel entranced. Its beauty
and tranquility fills your being.
miriam
Wow! that’s nice to hear Miriam. Art galleries are so inspiring! Thank you for sharing your lovely memories.
Monet’s garden is beautiful, Balroop. You transported me into the peaceful wonderland with your gorgeous poem. I loved the sensory details. “fragrance / blends with beauty, / flutters with the petals” ❤
Thank you Diana, I am so happy to hear your thoughts about this poem. All credit goes to the evocative painting. 😊
I wish my garden looked a tenth that good. 🙂
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Lovely, Balroop.
Thanks Staci.
Beautifully penned
Thank you arv.
You captured the beauty of the painting, Balroop 🙂 xo
Thank you Denise 🤗
Your vivid imagery makes me want to linger and spend an afternoon in that enchanting garden. Beautiful as always, Balroop!
Thank you so much Mae, I am glad the imagery matches the beauty of the garden. 🤗
Beautifully wise and pure. When I pause to admire the unique artist, all worries fade. ❤️
Thank you Gwen, that’s why Mother Nature has been called the healer. 😊
Love it! ❤️
A lovely response to the prompt, Balroop!
Thank you Jan 🤗
Balroop, all of the stanzas are beautiful but the 4th one is my favorite.
Thank you Lisa, I appreciate your feedback.
You’re very welcome.
Marvelous poem and mother nature is so beautiful and caring. Awesome, Balroop ❤️😊
Thank you Kamal for a lovely comment.
You are most welcome dear Balroop ❤️
Hi Balroop, this is very beautiful. Thank you.
Thanks Robbie. I am glad you like soft poetry too. I’ve read your syllabic poetry book, the review will be coming soon.
“Dainty damsel of buds.” Ohhhh, my heart sings as I sink into your garden.
You have articulated my sentiments Pam. Thank you for your lovely words. 🤗
xo Love your poetry, always, Balroop.
Thank you so much. 🥰
Beautiful poem, Balroop!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Thank you Yvette 💛
Balroop, your crown cinquain makes the painting come alive. This is so beautiful and rhythmic. Your words match the implied swaying of blooms from Monet’s painting. WOW! Love this. 💛
Thank you Colleen for your lovely words of encouragement, I am delighted that you found rhythm in a syllabic poem, as it is hard for me to think of rhythm within the form. 🤗
I think the rhythm comes from the sound of the words, at least it does to me. Your word choice (syllable count) gives the rhythm. Good job, Balroop. 🥳
Thank you so much 🥰😇
I love your crown cinquain. Feels perfect 🤩
Thank you Jude.
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This is a gorgeous piece. It transports me to a floral gardenscape ❤
Thank you Julia, welcome to Emotional Shadows. I am glad you like this poem.