I rise from the valley of death
The valley you pushed me into
The valley I reject…
Its deluge couldn’t drown me.
I don’t want to mourn for
The blessings that I have lost
I refuse to crumble under them
Within me, I can hear a loud protest.
Your memories don’t make me smile
They offer no solace now
They rest on a rocky ledge
Floundering in watery grave.
Divesting that soaking attire
I am seeking new vistas
My eye lashes are glowing
Approbations no longer allure me.
I seek the company of those
Who can guide me, escort me
Toward the path of enlightenment,
Forgiveness and peace.
© Balroop Singh
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You are brilliant.
Wow! Thank you so much Cindy.
A wonderful affirmation, Balroop, taking back a life and walking into a new future.
Thank you Sue. Some images are as evocative as this one!
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Beautiful and strongly felt poem, Balroop. The second stanza rings like a declaration of
strength from someone to long enslaved.
All being washed clean in the stream.
Miriam
Thanks for sharing your lovely words Miriam, I am delighted that you felt the emotion. 🤗
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It is a very strong poem that shuns the past and looks forward at creating a better future. The images it creates in my mind is that of a person who has experienced an extended bad phase and a will to fight and win. Excellent words.
Thank you for your lovely interpretation arv, only by shunning the past do we meet a bright future. 😊
Absolutely. I agree
Beautiful, Balroop. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks Jill 😊
Balroop, this poem speaks right to my heart. It is incredibly powerful. Another treasure.
Thank you Lisa, your encouraging words sparkle my muse. 🤗💕
What a perfect way you found to show a path forward out of the darkness. It ends with so much hope.
Thanks Denise 🤗
Powerful poetry, Balroop! Beautiful…
Thank you Bette 💕 have a wonderful weekend.
Thank you, Balroop. ❤ Wishing you a wonderful weekend too! xo
A beautiful poem, Balroop, full of strength and hope. 🙂
Thank you Diana, those are the two values I try to nurture. Have a relaxing Sunday.
Loss for words!
Thanks 😊❤️
Lovely, Balroop! Such a strong and visual message!
Thank you Mae.
Nice redemptive choice, in the end. Well done. ❤
Thank you Bela, choices make our life.
“I seek the company of those
Who can guide me, escort me
Toward the path of enlightenment,
Forgiveness and peace.”
These lines…❤️
Powerful Balroop!
Thank you
Thanks Marie.
Amazingly inspirational!! Love your writing 😊👍
Thank you Daisy. Love your support.
Forgiveness and renewal- wonderful, Balroop!
Thank you Jacquie. 🙂
I find it so fascinating how each different poet/writer interprets a photo. Your poem is strong (from the adversity) and life-affirming (giving up the negative). May we bloggers offer enlightenment to each other through our posts and our responses to each other’s stories and poem. ❤
Thank you Pam for such an insightful reflection, hope and positivity mentors my poetry. I am delighted to note that it enlightens too. 🙂
Wonderful words Balroop… Your words show the freedom of one who has found the flow from being trapped, as your words invite us to move on and through to leave behind those who caused negative wounds and embrace those whose harmony and love enfold us in safety and comfort..
Loved it.. ❤
Thanks for a beautiful interpretation Sue, I appreciate your thoughts. Stay blessed.
Many thanks and you too Balroop…. ❤