My hazy window
blurred by mist of memories
and motley motifs
fails to inspire somber muse
even bird songs sound mournful.
***
fragrance of summer,
dusk in the garden beckons
I hear your whispers:
yonder is the light – go, go
we’ll meet at the horizon.
***
blazing summer sun
hammers on velvety grass
smoldering swiftly
Diablo hills look ashen
just like my afflicted heart.
© Balroop Singh
Thanks to Colleen for the inspiration to write syllabic poetry.
My Kigo words: bird songs, dusk in the garden, grass.
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These words tug at my heart. Sending love and caring thoughts and you view the devil’s hills.
Thank you Darlene. 🤗
A heart that feels this deeply is a heart filled with love!
Many thanks for your love and support Annette.
Sublime poetry, Balroop. Beautiful and deeply mournful, my friend. ❤
Thank you for understanding Diana, Love and hugs.
I feel the pain and longing, Balroop. Xo
Thank you Denise 🤗
The poem is so expressive, Balroop. I know words can’t heal a broken heart, but I do have to believe that writing these emotions down helps. Hugs!
You are so right Jan. Poetry has been my therapy and keeps me alive. 🤗 Thank you so much for understanding.
So poignant, the calls of your beloved. The series works so well together. The ominous hills in the distance really help to create a shadowed atmosphere.
Thank you Lisa 🤗
You’re very welcome.
Moving and lovely
Thank you Cindy.
Such moving stanzas, Balroop! Keep writing it all out. Sending hugs…
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Thank you Yvette 🤗
Such a gulf of sadness and pain here’s Balroop . Don’t answer the call to the devil hills yet . Look for the hidden beauty, carry your loved one in your heart. …The sun is going to rise in you again. 💜
Thank you so much for your encouraging words Willow. 🤗
Balroop so profound and inspiring poem. Sending you lots of love and blessings 💕💕
Thank you Kamal.
Welcome dear Balroop 🤗
Such a beautifully written poem – about a sadness locked in the heart. Sending love, Balroop. ❤️
Thank you Gwen. Love and hugs.
I can feel the pain, Balroop. Words fall short for this heartfelt poem. Sending warmth and hugs, take care. 🙂
Than you for your lovely support, kitty. 🤗
I liked the metaphor ‘mist of memories’ and the alliteration, ‘motley motifs’ in the first poem. The feeling of grief and the attempt to break through it comes across in all three poems. I found this line poignantly melodious – yonder is the light – go, go /we’ll meet at the horizon.
Hugs to you, Balroop ji.
Thank you for this in-depth analysis of my poetry Smitha. Grief is a weird pal, it torments as well as finds its own channel of expression. 🤗
your haiku, stunning Balroop. No matter the season, they tug at my heart strings. Thanks for sharing. ((Hugs))
Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts Selma, much appreciated. 🤗
You’re always welcome, Balroop.
These, all three, capture both the view and your heart. The middle one made me tear up. Your poetry improves with wisdom and it reads as though your muse is somewhere close by, Balroop. Sending love to you as always. Hugs.
Thank you so much Lisa. Love and hugs.
oh wow. These are crazy awesome. Swoon worthy poetry 🤩👏🏾👏🏾🎬
Thank you!
Balroop, keep writing, my friend! Your poems are gems, beautiful, profound and they reach straight into my heart. Such eloquence in the midst of your overwhelming grief; May writing help even just a little. Xx ❤️
Thank you for your lovely words of support Annika. 🤗