Ah! The invitation! The exhilaration!
A dream come true!
She looked forward to the dance party – an annual ritual that she had seen from the seams. Today she would be the center of attraction – the lady with the veil, an enigma for everyone.
Eager to see the lady, we started the long trek to the magical land, hoping to reach before getting dehydrated. A mirage that seemed so near yet kept receding.
A greenway led us to the circular dance stage. Mist melted as we neared the venue.
One beat converted the stones into drums. We watched, mesmerized by the music. The sun suddenly grew dim, as if commanded by some unknown force.
The crescendo could be heard beyond eternity.
And there she was! A perfect figure, as if chiseled by an artist, making her first appearance. Twirling round and round, creating a divine circle around her…no beginning…no ending, just like the circle of life – palpable, perpetual.
Many yearned to touch her but a weird circle of light whirled around her. Slowly she drifted into dusk. Just like life.
©Balroop Singh.
Thanks to Sue Vincent for a lovely Thursday #writephoto Dance.
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Beautiful and memorising Balroop…. I could see her twirling within the mists of time.. ❤ 🙂
Sending love and well wishes dear Balroop.. ❤
Ah yes! you got it right Sue… mists of time! Love and hugs back to you dear friend. Nice to see you. 🙂
A wonderful telling, Balroop.
A mystical mood 🙂 Thank you Sue.
Beautifully told. Beautifully poignant and ethereal.
Thank you Louise, delighted to hear your lovely words.
I felt like I was there watching the dance, Balroop.
I am glad my words could pull you in Denise 🤗
I love where you took this story, Balroop. Absolutely beautiful!❤️
Thank you Jill 😊
Under the spell… Well done, Balroop! ❤
Thanks Bette, dance of life is magical! 🌼🦋🌼
Great visuals Balroop. I could see her whirl away into the wind. 🙂
Thanks Deb, Sue’s image is quite stimulating 😊
What a great last line. That’ll stick with me.
Thanks Jacqui, it sums up life! Have a wonderful weekend.
Nice blog
Thanks Saania
My pleasure, followed you ✨
Thanks 😊
This was magical, Balroop. Well done!
Thank you Lisa, I am delighted to hear this.
Some prose from you, Balroop. What fun to read and a magical story. The prompt is certainly evocative. Well done.
Yes Diana, the image could take you anywhere! I landed in the middle of nowhere! 🙂 Thanks for your lovely words of encouragement..
Ooo, very cool. And I ADORE that last line!
Thanks Mae, just trying to write something different 😊
Love this. Funny I wrote today about dancing as well. It can be a mesmerizing affair. 🙏😍
Yes, I’ve just now read your beautiful poem. Thanks for coming over to share your thoughts. 😊
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A mesmerizing and magical piece of writing, Balroop. You have a gifted imagination, my friend. 💗
Thank you for your lovely words Lauren. 🤗
Ethereal and beautiful, Balroop ❤
Thank you Jacquie. 🙂
Marvellous use of language 🙂
Thank you, I am delighted to hear that 😊
I really enjoyed this piece of prose, Balroop. Really lovely.
Thank you Robbie.
What a beautiful story Balroop. It brought back special memories of Sufi dancing.
Thank you Brigid. Yes, Sufi dancing is as exciting as that. 🙂
Wow. I can see her! feel her! I believe in her! Sometimes, I want to follow her. ❤ BEAUTIFUL
Thank you for a lovely way to look at the lady with the veil…life! We all follow her Pam, in our own way. 🤗
YES! ❤